Hello Manny, I really liked how you described how the dolphins felt, how they swim, and how fast they are. You did a relly good job on your summer learning journey Manny, keep up the good work. The things you could maybe work on is maybe adding a bit more describing words to your dolphin thingy. Also you should add a title of what project you did on your summer learning journey project. From Shelby.
Hello Manny,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described how the dolphins felt, how they swim, and how fast they are. You did a relly good job on your summer learning journey Manny, keep up the good work. The things you could maybe work on is maybe adding a bit more describing words to your dolphin thingy. Also you should add a title of what project you did on your summer learning journey project.
From Shelby.
Thank you so much for your comment. what is your favourite animal and is it a sea animal or land animal.
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