Writing (Describing a moment in time Writing).

lately for about the past few days maybe about a week or two, we had been working on descriptive writing after we finished that, we started working on describing a moment in time, and we had to do this on slides and we also had to make up our own writing for each picture, this is what I wrote. So I hope that you like was I have written personally I think that it is not to bad for all of the writing but anyway I hope you enjoy it.